Dark designs for childrens shows !!
12 years 8 months ago #1164
by sdrury
Dark designs for childrens shows !! was created by sdrury
Hi all,
I just wanted to get some feedback on my recently updated childrensmagicparties.com website.
I go against the grain when it comes to kids entertainment as I believe that clowns should stay in the circus! I perform magic for children as well as adults because I love classic magic - I also love the more psychological side and even will present elements of this when appropriate for older kids - hence the dark design (I believe a website should be true to your preferred performance style)
Any feedback on this site appreciated.
Cheers, Steve
I just wanted to get some feedback on my recently updated childrensmagicparties.com website.
I go against the grain when it comes to kids entertainment as I believe that clowns should stay in the circus! I perform magic for children as well as adults because I love classic magic - I also love the more psychological side and even will present elements of this when appropriate for older kids - hence the dark design (I believe a website should be true to your preferred performance style)
Any feedback on this site appreciated.
Cheers, Steve
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12 years 7 months ago #1166
by mattr
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Replied by mattr on topic Re:Dark designs for childrens shows !!
Hi Steve-
Nice website. I like the dark color and the colorful graphic as some pizazz as well. A couple of suggestions:
- I would put a link to a video of one of your performances front and center. If it is there, maybe I missed it. Clearly, what you are proposing as children\'s entertainer if different than what most are offering so a video would be key to show a sample of your style.
- The main title \"Children\'s Magic Parties\" is a bit generic. I think it is ok as a URL, but the main title it seems to plain. Maybe \"Mystical Children\'s Magic Parties by Steve Drury\" would be better.
- The left side navigation may be a bit overwhelming. I would suggesting hiding some of this detail in lower pages. For example, you could have a party tips link which then lists all the orange links. Same for the different workshops.
- I always suggest a prominent \"Book Now\" link which gives your contact info and also a web form which allows then to put in all the dates etc. and send to you
I hope this helps, but just my opinion...thanks, Matt
Nice website. I like the dark color and the colorful graphic as some pizazz as well. A couple of suggestions:
- I would put a link to a video of one of your performances front and center. If it is there, maybe I missed it. Clearly, what you are proposing as children\'s entertainer if different than what most are offering so a video would be key to show a sample of your style.
- The main title \"Children\'s Magic Parties\" is a bit generic. I think it is ok as a URL, but the main title it seems to plain. Maybe \"Mystical Children\'s Magic Parties by Steve Drury\" would be better.
- The left side navigation may be a bit overwhelming. I would suggesting hiding some of this detail in lower pages. For example, you could have a party tips link which then lists all the orange links. Same for the different workshops.
- I always suggest a prominent \"Book Now\" link which gives your contact info and also a web form which allows then to put in all the dates etc. and send to you
I hope this helps, but just my opinion...thanks, Matt
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